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January 2020’s Page Turner
Page Turners
by Val Tobin
Agents and editors will often decide whether a book is for them by reading the first page of a manuscript. Many readers also decide to buy a book based on that critical first-page sample. Each month I post the first page of a book and you can vote on whether or not youโd read the book based on the sample.
After you vote, Iโll let you know the title of the book, my reaction to the sample, and why Iโd keep reading or why Iโd put it down. The goal is to have fun while we explore the beginnings of a variety of books and what compels readers to keep reading.
While I wonโt divulge the title or author until youโve read the piece, I will include the genre and any preliminary items (for example, quotes) youโd see when opening the book on your own.
NOTE: Set aside your preference for or against any specific genre and just focus on the writing. Does it compel you to turn the page and find out what comes next?
Todayโs Excerpt
Genre: Historical Fiction
Prologue
My house stands at the edge of the earth. Together, the house and I have held strong against the churning tides of Fundy. Two sisters, stubborn in our bones.
My father, Judah Rare, built this farmhouse in 1917. It was my wedding gift. A strong house for a Rare woman, he said. I was eighteen. He and his five brothers, shipbuilders by trade, raised her worthy from timbers born on my grandfatherโs land. Oak for stability and certainty, yellow birch for new life and change, spruce for protection from the world outside. Father was an intuitive carpenter, carrying out his work like holy ritual. His callused hands, veined with pride, had a memory for measure and a knowing of what it takes to withstand the sea.
Strength and a sense of knowing, thatโs what you have to have to live in the Bay. Each morning you set your sights on the tasks ahead and hope that when the day is done youโre farther along than when you started. Our little village, perched on the crook of Godโs finger, has always been ruled by storm and season. The men did whatever they had to do to get by. They joked with one โฆ
Would you turn the page? Vote now.
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Todayโs Book Revealed
Todayโs book is The Birth House by Ami McKay.
Blurb from Amazon
The Birth House is the story of Dora Rare, the first daughter to be born in five generations of Rares. As a child in an isolated village in Nova Scotia, she is drawn to Miss Babineau, an outspoken Acadian midwife with a gift for healing. Dora becomes Miss B.โs apprentice, and together they help the women of Scots Bay through infertility, difficult labours, breech births, unwanted pregnancies and even unfulfilling sex lives. Filled with details as compelling as they are surprising, The Birth House is an unforgettable tale of the struggles women have faced to have control of their own bodies and to keep the best parts of tradition alive in the world of modern medicine.
Would I Turn the Page?
No.
If this was all I had to go on, I’d find it uninteresting and providing too much information in the form of telling to grab me. For me, itโs missing a hook that drags me into the story. This is the problem with many stories that open with prologues.
When I first started studying the craft of novel writing, I read that many editors, agents, and even readers donโt read prologues. I didnโt understand why that would be. Isnโt the prologue an important part of the story? Iโve observed since then that no, it often isnโt. Often, the prologue is superfluous and tedious to read.
In this case, as far as the first page is concerned, itโs a lot of extraneous information that, as a reader, I donโt care about yet. I do like the writing style, so as an editor or agent, Iโd skip past the prologue and start reading the story to see if Iโd want to work on it. As a reader, Iโd put the book back on the shelf if all I had to go on was that first page.
Luckily, itโs not. Iโve read Ami McKayโs Witches of New York and enjoyed it, so I was anxious to read The Birth House. I enjoyed the read and finished the story. I even recommend it to others. Iโm also planning to read more of her work, in particular, The Virgin Cure.
Funny thing about first pages: they donโt always tell the whole story.
What do you think?
Does this passage from The Birth House intrigue you? Does it make you want to turn the page and continue reading? Will you run out now and buy the book? Borrow it?
Val Tobin writes speculative fiction and searches the world over for the perfect butter tart. Her home is in Newmarket, Ontario, where she enjoys writing, reading, and talking about writing and reading.
The genre would make the difference for me. If the story is based in truth, I’d likely keep reading. Otherwise, not so much. ‘
Thanks, Val. I would keep reading because of the writing style and probably the promise of the story on the back cover. I enjoyed her “crook of God’s finger” and other phrases so I will look forward to finding this book and reading it later.
I get what you’re saying about prologues, though. Good information, thanks.