by Val Tobin
Agents and editors will often decide whether a book is for them by reading the first page of a manuscript. Many readers also decide to buy a book based on that critical first-page sample. Each month I post the first page of a book and you can vote on whether or not you’d read the book based on the sample.
After you vote, I’ll let you know the title of the book, my reaction to the sample, and why I’d keep reading or why I’d put it down. The goal is to have fun while we explore the beginnings of a variety of books and what compels readers to keep reading.
While I won’t divulge the title or author until you’ve read the piece, I will include the genre and any preliminary items (for example, quotes) you’d see when opening the book on your own.
NOTE: Set aside your preference for or against any specific genre and just focus on the writing. Does it compel you to turn the page and find out what comes next? Base your decision to turn the page on the excerpt’s writing alone.
Genre: Science Fiction
“I’ve watched through his eyes, I’ve listened through his ears, and I tell you he’s the one. Or at least as close as we’re going to get.”
“That’s what you said about the brother.”
“The brother tested out impossible. For other reasons. Nothing to do with his ability.”
“Same with the sister. And there are doubts about him. He’s too malleable. Too willing to submerge himself in someone else’s will.”
“Not if the other person is his enemy.”
“So what do we do? Surround him with enemies all the time?”
“If we have to.”
“I thought you said you liked this kid.”
“If the buggers get him, they’ll make me look like his favorite uncle.”
“All right. We’re saving the world, after all. Take him.”
The monitor lady smiled very nicely and tousled his hair and said, “Andrew, I supposed by now you’re just absolutely sick of having that horrid monitor. Well, I have good news for you. That monitor is going to come out today. We’re going to take it right out, and it won’t hurt a bit.”
Ender nodded. It was a lie, of course, that it wouldn’t hurt a bit. But since adults always said it when it was going to hurt, he could count on that statement as an accurate prediction of the future. Sometimes, lies were more dependable than the truth.…
Today’s Book Revealed
Today’s book is Ender’s Game by Orson Scott Card.
Blurb from Amazon
The worldwide bestseller, Ender’s Game by Orson Scott Card comes to the screen at last in a major motion picture event in November 2013. Starring Hugo’s Asa Butterfield, Harrison Ford, and Ben Kingsley, the movie is sure to inspire a new audience of fans to read the book that started it all.
Once again, Earth is under attack. An alien species is poised for a final assault. The survival of humanity depends on a military genius who can defeat the aliens. But who?
Ender Wiggin. Brilliant. Ruthless. Cunning. A tactical and strategic master. And a child.
Recruited for military training by the world government, Ender’s childhood ends the moment he enters his new home: Battle School. Among the elite recruits Ender proves himself to be a genius among geniuses. He excels in simulated war games. But is the pressure and loneliness taking its toll on Ender? Simulations are one thing. How will Ender perform in real combat conditions? After all, Battle School is just a game. Isn’t it?
THE ENDER UNIVERSE
Ender’s Game / Ender in Exile / Speaker for the Dead / Xenocide / Children of the Mind
Ender’s Shadow series
Ender’s Shadow / Shadow of the Hegemon / Shadow Puppets / Shadow of the Giant / Shadows in Flight
Children of the Fleet
The First Formic War (with Aaron Johnston)
Earth Unaware / Earth Afire / Earth Awakens
The Second Formic War (with Aaron Johnston)
The Swarm /The Hive
A War of Gifts /First Meetings
Would I Turn the Page?
Yes, despite the rule-breaking Orson Scott Card does immediately.
The story opens with two big writing no-nos: dialogue before introducing a character and talking heads. The two speakers come across as disembodied voices, but Orson Scott Card uses this to great effect. The conversation provides information while raising questions that made me want to keep reading. Reread the passage and see how much we’re given about not just Ender and his family, but also about the speakers themselves.
I particularly liked that they mention the “buggers” without having any “as you know, Bob” moments explaining them. You want to know about the buggers? Keep reading. The term isn’t used here as British slang.
They reference some overdone tropes (the one; save the world) during the course of the conversation as well, but introduce doubt at the same time. As a reader, you assume Ender is “the one,” as one of the talking heads suspects, but there’s enough doubt cast you wonder if it’s possible he isn’t. Add to that our introduction to the main character as a child anticipating pain, and I couldn’t help but turn the page to see where this was all going. After that, I was more than hooked and read the book quickly.
The two opening sentences instantly sucked me in: “I’ve watched through his eyes, I’ve listened through his ears, and I tell you he’s the one. Or at least as close as we’re going to get.” Watched through his eyes and listened through his ears? How? The one for what, exactly? The speaker also implies that the subject of the conversation may fall short of what they want him to achieve, but if that’s as good as it gets, they’re willing to risk it.
The last sentence on that first page, which shows us a lot about Ender and what he’s already endured, clinched it for me: “Sometimes, lies were more dependable than the truth.”
It’s worth noting that the story opens from the adults’ perspective and then dives into the point of view of the child who will be the story’s protagonist. We are shown the adults are desperate, and as a result, control everything about the child’s life—and this child isn’t the first one they’ve subjected to their monitoring. The adults are bodiless voices without identity and not fixed in any physical location. Even the “monitor lady” isn’t named, nor do we know where she and Ender are. The first character whose identity we learn is Ender. The monitor lady calls him “Andrew” and the narrative refers to him as “Ender.”
I picked up Ender’s Game from the library because I wanted to see what all the fuss was about. I also want to see the movie and prefer to read the book first. It doesn’t always work out, but in this case, I pulled it off. I’ve yet to see the movie and hope it lives up to the book.
Even if science fiction isn’t your go-to genre, it’s worth reading. I’ve always believed that a well-written story transcends genre, and this one falls into that category. I like science fiction, but not hard science fiction. This one told a riveting story. I look forward to reading more books in the series.
What do you think? Did the opening annoy you or suck you in?
What do you think?
Does this passage from Ender’s Game intrigue you? Does it make you want to turn the page and continue reading? Will you run out now and buy the book? Borrow it?
Val Tobin writes speculative fiction and searches the world over for the perfect butter tart. Her home is in Newmarket, Ontario, where she enjoys writing, reading, and talking about writing and reading.